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How short is a story?

The challenge is to write a complete story in exactly 81 words.
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Why 81? It’s just long enough to allow for a story to develop but short enough to mean every single word needs thoughtful weighing. Mostly though it’s just a nice number, ask a mathematician.

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Nunchucks

There’s a Bruce Lee lookalike guarding the door: a wiry little fucker with pudding bowl hair.
Jack watches him work the nunchucks. Dizzying, hypnotic.
“Leave now,” Jack warns. “Before I hurt you.”
Little guy smirks. Crouches down, arms out, eyes closed.
“Seriously?” Jack says.
Jack’s got a plan: kick the little bastard in the nuts. Guy’s quick though. Lightning quick. Jack gets a face full of nunchucks.
“Last chance,” Jack drools, staring up at the cracked ceiling, before everything goes black.


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Nunchucks
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